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Summer went away in the blink of an eye...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 10, 2012 at 10:39 AM
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1 thing....missing second i on within....other than that...wonderful poem...enjoyed it very much
posted by
Annicita
on September 9, 2012 at 8:06 PM
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Lovely! "Clicking trees shake in the exchange" is elegant and closely
observed! I also love the oil and water comparison! Way to go, Jay!
posted by
2902
on September 9, 2012 at 6:39 PM
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UtahJay
Fall fell here today too Jay, had the furnace turned on, 
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 9, 2012 at 6:38 PM
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The speed of the months and seasons for me are directly related to the speed of my years. Yesterday I was sixty, I am sure of it.
posted by
Justi
on September 9, 2012 at 5:34 PM
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Even though August was so hot and dry, and the drought seemed to last forever, I'm already asking, "Where did it go?"
posted by
TAPS.
on September 9, 2012 at 3:38 PM
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UtahJay
mI look forward to seeing June again Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 9, 2012 at 2:47 PM
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We are never already Jay as your poem suggests, soon will we be saying, I have never known winter
pass so quickly
posted by
C_C_T
on September 9, 2012 at 11:25 AM
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