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what a lonely little boy you were. Born from the love of your parents but
too late in everyone's life to have that altogether family feel and understanding. When you were born, all those that could have been heros to you were busy starting their lives and not much interested in a baby I suppose, may have resented you even...well obviously old Green eyes did!! No one thought aboth"the kids" feelings.
posted by
Kabu
on August 24, 2012 at 10:13 AM
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I know of a few people who find hunting to be soothing...Those memories made quite the impression.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 24, 2012 at 9:17 AM
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UtahJay
Nice memories of the past of life to make you smile today.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 24, 2012 at 5:58 AM
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Lion is so right. It brings out your love and warm memories for your brother. Very touching - loved it.
posted by
shobana
on August 24, 2012 at 5:06 AM
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This is incredible. It's so human and open that i think any reader must respond to it
posted by
lionreign
on August 24, 2012 at 3:43 AM
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there is always one sibling who brings back wonderful memories.....utah....try to use the word and less and break into smaller sentences. It will help tighten your writing....the poem is great
posted by
Annicita
on August 24, 2012 at 2:51 AM
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Good memories Jay sometimes we forget the good times, but the are nice to recall 
posted by
C_C_T
on August 24, 2012 at 12:27 AM
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Nice. Thank God for the Smedley's in our life. We can only hope that
we are being Smedleys for someone else.
posted by
2902
on August 24, 2012 at 12:05 AM
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UtahJay
®Such a good image you have of him Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on August 23, 2012 at 10:43 PM
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