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There is something so liberating about flying, I feel.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 24, 2012 at 9:16 AM
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Love it!! After years, it is still a thrill to see the birds migrating each year.
posted by
mariss9
on August 23, 2012 at 9:33 PM
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PS Please don't ask why I said capital K and not capital P. Ginny had
a bad night last night and I'm exhausted.
posted by
2902
on August 23, 2012 at 6:13 PM
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Lovely, Jay! You are talking real poetry (capital K)! I wish
I had written it!
posted by
2902
on August 23, 2012 at 5:52 PM
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this is your best one yet in this collection
posted by
Annicita
on August 23, 2012 at 4:05 PM
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This is a beautiful poem Jay. I love the metaphors and the emotion that spills out of your words. You say you don't well with reality.....? Somehow, I think you do just fine. When you have words like that, reality is hard to hide. Keep writing and keep up the good work. Have a wonderful day. My husband has posted a poem I hope you get a chance to read his work too...from a mans point of view, lol. See ya later...
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 23, 2012 at 12:32 PM
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UtahJay
For myself birds in the sky tickle my fancy Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on August 23, 2012 at 12:29 PM
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UtahJay
I do well 'soaring into my illusions' real life is difficult.............
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 23, 2012 at 10:55 AM
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