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Well Jay it is so much easier to understand the deeper meaning behind your poems when you explain beforehand the reason for which they were written. I wish you loads of sucess. A real good start has been made.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 22, 2012 at 12:04 AM
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Hi Utah, I think this is ingenious, the way you write your life in poetic form. I did the same thing but it was purely fiction - a storyline first with a poem accompanying it. Well I am waiting to have that published soon too. You write such beautiful poetry and I really think that you should have it compiled in a book form and just as I leave it as a legacy to our families! 
posted by
shobana
on August 21, 2012 at 10:34 PM
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wonderful write and I mean it. I love the way you have led us into the
Poetry with dialogue first so we can really appreciate where your mind is sitting. Don't hurry this along. I want to absorb each entry. Come back and read again.
posted by
Kabu
on August 21, 2012 at 5:37 PM
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Thank goodness for those plums. 
What a great idea - to write about your life through poetry.
posted by
Troosha
on August 21, 2012 at 5:23 PM
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Very good at making one feel terrible for what the child went through. And that's what great poetry is about isn't it? Making the reader live each word. Kudos!
posted by
adnohr
on August 21, 2012 at 4:28 PM
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Thank you Annictia.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 21, 2012 at 2:14 PM
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just one thing i noticed was not quite right....would it not be closer to the ledge not steeper?
otherwise great job and good luck
posted by
Annicita
on August 21, 2012 at 1:51 PM
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