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Re: adnohr
Go with the characters. Apparently that's the way it works - you start writing and the characters take over and make the story for you. No harm in trying.
posted by
adnohr
on August 14, 2012 at 9:01 PM
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adnohr
I am still pondering which way to go from here. 
posted by
Pannonian
on August 14, 2012 at 5:42 PM
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Former Student
Yea. I am wondering about that too.
posted by
Pannonian
on August 14, 2012 at 5:40 PM
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CCT
If I were that good, I probably wouldn't be posting here. But I appreciate your compliment.
posted by
Pannonian
on August 14, 2012 at 5:38 PM
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PatB
"Nice opening! (no pun intended) "
Like your sense of humor.
posted by
Pannonian
on August 14, 2012 at 5:35 PM
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Very good!! I love mysteries! You will continue, of course. Please.
posted by
adnohr
on August 14, 2012 at 1:22 PM
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A very interesting read here. I look forward to seeing where it goes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 14, 2012 at 10:28 AM
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Quite interesting Pan, I admire your character's inqisitiveness. It is usually wise to force the mouth open and see if there is a scent of poison or a broken tooth which held a deadly capsule. Seriously I think you hold the readers interest holding it in the same person and it is probably a book I would buy especially on Kindle. Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 14, 2012 at 7:58 AM
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Nice opening! (no pun intended)
posted by
Pat_B
on August 14, 2012 at 6:15 AM
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