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Very cool work...intense!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on August 31, 2012 at 7:09 PM
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A fine description of distracted thought when one is busy with a lot of things. Those cuts and burns are very familiar with busy hands. 
I liked the ending, some of it really does not matter for any length of time, and is not worth being injured over. 
posted by
mariss9
on August 15, 2012 at 8:22 AM
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Absence, and the empty spaces that one has to, without wanting it so, embrace. Well done.
posted by
anib
on August 14, 2012 at 10:12 PM
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2902, it is the idea of being absent in your own present moment.
posted by
calia14
on August 14, 2012 at 7:39 AM
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Very interesting. Well done.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 13, 2012 at 2:44 PM
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I've had my mind race a time or two.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 13, 2012 at 9:32 AM
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?Fascinating, but what connects it to the title?
posted by
2902
on August 12, 2012 at 4:56 PM
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