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CThis poem has everything. It’s an analogy and fantasy with imagery and personal reflection love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on August 10, 2012 at 5:36 AM
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mmmmmmm.....i prefer to be alone alot
posted by
Annicita
on August 9, 2012 at 4:19 PM
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Shobana
I spent a lot of time alone in the forest and you certainly used 'lonely' well, it is that.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 9, 2012 at 1:12 PM
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i just love to walk alone on a deserted beach, it was one of my pass times
back in Australia.
posted by
Kabu
on August 9, 2012 at 12:56 PM
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You painted a vivid picture with words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 9, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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So it is better not to go walking alone nor to be the King of the Castle shouting you are the dirty rascal. I expect you have met a few. If you can find a spare knife , I'll be on my way I could do with a bit of peace and quiet, I bet you won't paint your walls this colour, At least your poems are thought provoking.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2012 at 8:25 AM
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being alone is nice while walking and thinking
posted by
Lanetay
on August 9, 2012 at 7:14 AM
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Wow that was good and the last line was devastating. Bravo!
posted by
lionreign
on August 9, 2012 at 3:56 AM
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This scene describes my mind.
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on August 9, 2012 at 1:15 AM
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Shobana
I lost my way once or twice, but it's an intriguing landscape you created.
posted by
2902
on August 9, 2012 at 12:18 AM
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