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Re: Re: Kabu
you are right of course oh wise one.
posted by
Kabu
on August 9, 2012 at 8:46 PM
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I love the way you write CCT. You have so much grace and style in your poems. They flow with such ease and the metaphors create such an amazing image in the readers eye. You get your message across clearly and beautifully. I wish I could write like you. Thank you for sharing and teaching. Have a wonderful day. I always look forward to reading your work. 
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 9, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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Thank you Lion. A bit hot in the greenhouse today.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2012 at 7:12 AM
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I love some of your metaphors in this one, it's quite amazingly descriptive
posted by
lionreign
on August 9, 2012 at 3:18 AM
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I must have some goats, come on don't be mean, I thought perhaps 5 goats stop trying to hypnotize me I just woke up . I need the camels as well.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 9, 2012 at 12:07 AM
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"The past is plague" - something to think about CC. Lovely poem my friend ..oh alright 5 camels for you too..
posted by
shobana
on August 8, 2012 at 11:28 PM
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Thank you FS you hit the nail on the head
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2012 at 11:15 PM
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Re: Justi
You are right of course Justi, I suppose it is never to late to learn,
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2012 at 11:14 PM
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Re: adnohr
Thank you adnohr, it makes the effort worth doing.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2012 at 11:11 PM
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Re: Kabu
KABU I suppose some things are impressed on one's mind so deeply at the time, it is no wonder that we recall them, I suppose we can't keep blaming ourselves for what happened in different circumstances.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2012 at 11:06 PM
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CC does it once more, a wonderful peace of written word.
I often just before sleep am bitten in my mind by some thing horrid I wish I hadn't done. I forgive myself during the day for being less than perfect but yes am plagued at times by the long, should be forgotten past.
posted by
Kabu
on August 8, 2012 at 7:36 PM
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ANd hopefully this new one will not also become a plague of the past. Beautiful writing, C.C. - your expressions are original and pretty darned awesome!
posted by
adnohr
on August 8, 2012 at 6:13 PM
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C.C.
Why is it we don't give up the past, the bad parts of it? We often spoil the present with the fear of the future and the pain of the past. Good work. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on August 8, 2012 at 11:40 AM
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That makes a lot of sense about fear and its place in time.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 8, 2012 at 10:31 AM
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