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The ones that we outgrow or that somehow fall away with time are okay, maybe a little melancholy. The ones caused by bitterness or misunderstanding are another matter and never easy. Fine poem!
posted by
2902
on August 6, 2012 at 11:44 AM
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That is some good imagery that you got there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 6, 2012 at 9:22 AM
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I am not an expert for sure on love
posted by
Lanetay
on August 6, 2012 at 8:49 AM
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shobana
The true feelings of love speak softly love. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on August 6, 2012 at 6:24 AM
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Shobana
Love just disappears because, like a garden unwatered, it stops growing and dies.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 6, 2012 at 6:16 AM
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Relationship is the only thing that both man and woman couldn't comprehend deeply, and always look for something or someone to blame when it goes wrong.
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on August 6, 2012 at 5:23 AM
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I wonder if we expect too much from our relationships and, by so doing, doom them to fail. Great poem, I especially love the last two lines
posted by
lionreign
on August 6, 2012 at 3:15 AM
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A good poem Shobana thousands wonder the same thing . Perhaps life was not mean't to be serious.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 5, 2012 at 10:37 PM
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Some times love just doesn't last a life time, sometime there are just
too many outside disturbances for love to last...sometimes, like my first marriage as I always say, the marriage just died of exhaustion.
posted by
Kabu
on August 5, 2012 at 9:05 PM
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