Go to Calia's Discoveries
- Add a comment
- Go to New Story: Rosalina part 1
You have two good characters and I shall be interested to see how this developes with good ideas.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 25, 2012 at 7:42 AM
| link to this | reply
I am curious to see where this goes.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 24, 2012 at 9:28 AM
| link to this | reply
lol, I just copied n pasted it from word and it ran together like that. I will take the time to seperate it. Thanks for the suggestion 
posted by
calia14
on July 24, 2012 at 8:00 AM
| link to this | reply
Oops - That's Calia...Even got the name wrong. I'll blame that on age too.
posted by
adnohr
on July 23, 2012 at 11:20 PM
| link to this | reply
Caila - this is a great read. If I could make a small suggestion - certainly not about what you write, I loved the story - but I had a problem keeping my place because everything seemed to run together. Paragraph breaks, maybe? I kept getting lost and had to look back for reference.
I'm blaming it on age.
posted by
adnohr
on July 23, 2012 at 11:19 PM
| link to this | reply