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well said, Shelly...thanks!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 23, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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thanks, Intern!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 23, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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thanks, shobana!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 23, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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Re: Re: huh?
no problem, Bob...thanks!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 23, 2012 at 9:41 AM
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Re: marlindanse
thanks, Wiley!
posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 23, 2012 at 9:40 AM
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That's why it's good to protect one's karma! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 22, 2012 at 3:04 PM
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And one never knows when to expect it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 22, 2012 at 9:51 AM
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When its dark and you're the sky, old fiction comes back to haunt you - fantastic work.
posted by
shobana
on July 22, 2012 at 6:23 AM
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Re: huh?
I still don't understand the poem as well I'd like, but please excuse whatever rudeness may underlie my earlier comment. I guess I was feeling a bit off last night when I wrote it. Poetry's a dicey business, and we all have our own criteria.
posted by
2902
on July 22, 2012 at 4:37 AM
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marlindanse
Very black, kind of depressing, 
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 21, 2012 at 8:47 PM
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huh?
The capital letter that begins a sentence starts a promise to make sense. Help me out here, please.
posted by
2902
on July 21, 2012 at 8:29 PM
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I may not be able to tell the exact feelings about this poen, but I can tell you that I know that dark something in me feels this.
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on July 21, 2012 at 8:27 PM
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Intriguing and deep...
posted by
Katray2
on July 21, 2012 at 8:23 PM
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the sky
You may be right, but I can't tell. Need a clue.
posted by
2902
on July 21, 2012 at 8:13 PM
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I just love your writing, even if i am not quite sure of the meaning,
It just flows beautifully.
posted by
Kabu
on July 21, 2012 at 7:34 PM
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marlindanse
jThat’s deep reading. It brings to mind maybe a mystery, suspense, or ghost story. However it could also be about your mind. The words come to you. And you analyze your own work. Similarly to the black sky the day comes around again such as it does writing. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 21, 2012 at 6:37 PM
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Your writings
Hey thanks for the visit and the reads. I went through a lot of yours too and I can relate to a lot of it. Yeah, that's it write down what you feel, it's always better when it comes from the heart, no matter the form, or lack of. I see a lot of depth in your writings. I hope you're doing well on the site. Not much luck for me yet, but I'm hopeful. Any tips?
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on July 21, 2012 at 6:25 PM
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