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I know of a lot of people who are quick to bring up their marriage or current relationship to an ex...You capture the feelings so well in the second poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 21, 2012 at 11:20 AM
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All of this post is wonderful. Yes I do understand the pain perhaps but there is also a new beauty of a different kind if we only know it. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on July 21, 2012 at 11:18 AM
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Re: Bubble gum color; one of my favorites!..:)
Dear me Ray I hope you did not suffer from the same symptoms, one had to whip up an almost ethereal image to confront someone. I try to get under the skin of your poetry, 
posted by
C_C_T
on July 21, 2012 at 9:47 AM
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Re: adnohr
Adnohr I think we will skip the sad minstrel, now feet together, salt , mustard, viinigar pepper. I bet you could teach Smooch to skip and it will get you ready for your big romance.. I visualize you walking with your dogs in the snow up the hilly terrain and it would evoke a romantic feeling to a man in his prime . Well I can still remember when I was in my prime, I thInk. 
posted by
C_C_T
on July 21, 2012 at 9:39 AM
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The first poem would make a skipping song, nut the second would be a sad minstrel's ballad.
posted by
adnohr
on July 21, 2012 at 12:14 AM
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Bubble gum color; one of my favorites!..:)
Time is the master of surprise indeed...I appreciate the explanation of your poem, CCT; I try to do so occasionally, if I can understand myself..:) The poem itself is poignant, honest and well written..
posted by
Katray2
on July 20, 2012 at 11:00 PM
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Re: CCT
Wiley you read correctly ,, you were a very courageous man to take on so many.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 20, 2012 at 10:57 PM
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Re: love the colour of the flower of course, your flowers are a daily joy for
Yes I thought you might think so Kabu, The one disadvantage or advantage in those days was that one knew the history of the family one might be crawling onto bed with. 
posted by
C_C_T
on July 20, 2012 at 10:52 PM
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Yes too much planning and not enough patience probably Sam
posted by
C_C_T
on July 20, 2012 at 10:48 PM
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Re:Taps
In my dreams Taps, I prefer to watch from a comfortable reclining chair.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 20, 2012 at 10:47 PM
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Are you going to go to any of the Olympics? Are you taking a fair lady along with you?
posted by
TAPS.
on July 20, 2012 at 7:46 PM
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I am smiling! LOL! And at times it is painfully different than the intent! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 20, 2012 at 7:39 PM
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love the colour of the flower of course, your flowers are a daily joy for
me.
And what fun your poems....that first poem the girl really let the poor boy know he had missed out. faint heart never won fair lady....sad but true!
posted by
Kabu
on July 20, 2012 at 4:57 PM
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CCT
Replicating little ones with #1 wifey became a hobby for me too, five of them. Then I became step-pa to six more. Glad that's over. Loved that flower, another dilly.The poem is kind of sad, having to wait for a conclusion not really desired is how I read it my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 20, 2012 at 11:49 AM
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