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Re: Your writings
Thank you for your comment and suggestions; taken in the spirit in which given. Glad to meet you and I will read your work soon. 
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Katray2
on July 22, 2012 at 12:21 PM
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Your writings
Hello Poet, I've read through your work and your own comments on your work. I've found that we writers are our own worse critics. Don't be so hard on yourself. Your messages come across clear and hold meaning. The only thing I would suggest, if I may, is that you use your punctuation to give tone to your words. Remember, when things are written we don't get the same tone as when we speak, that's where punctuation comes in. It lends the tone we would normally use when we speak and it breaks up your verses so the reader knows when to pause, when to go on to the next verse, when to empahsize, etc. Just a friendly piece of advice I picked up along the way. Take if you want. Thats the beauty of poetry, we speak from the heart and in the end it's really for us and not anyone else. So if you're happy with it, we love it! :-)
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RamfamilyWritings
on July 21, 2012 at 8:52 PM
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AW, Knuckles!!..hehe..
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 1:27 PM
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 1:25 PM
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Is it now?..hmm, go on...
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 1:20 PM
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heat...so common in the midwest...
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 1:18 PM
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Well yes, a little..:) 
How did you see that??...
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 1:12 PM
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blushing, are we?
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 1:05 PM
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Hmm, the poems ya mean?..:) 
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 12:56 PM
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the dare is to share...
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 12:55 PM
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Ah yes, that would be cool..) I remember those poems; have one or two saved somewhere...
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 12:48 PM
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Nothing like a marble floor...
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 12:30 PM
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Cheers and soothing frost..) 
I hope you are keeping cool in this heat wave..
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 12:14 PM
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 12:11 PM
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Thank you..
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Katray2
on July 17, 2012 at 12:08 PM
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Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 17, 2012 at 12:04 PM
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It can be so painful when it suddenly ends like that.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 11, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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Same thing happened to me last week. But, well, it is a relief now.
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on July 11, 2012 at 1:30 AM
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I edited a bit; was blinded by a rush of emotions when I posted
posted by
Katray2
on July 10, 2012 at 10:06 PM
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Re: sad when it is over, well sometimes a relief. LOL.
Thank you, Dear Kabu...
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Katray2
on July 10, 2012 at 10:03 PM
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From Dictionary.com:
clast
noun
a grain of sediment, silt, sand, gravel, etc., especially as a constituent fragment of a clastic rock formation, as distinguished from a chemical or biogenic component of such a formation.
Origin:
Old French blo, blau ( French bleu )
I used clast to mean I feel as insignificant, unimportant, etc. to the subject of the verse as a pebble.
Hope this helped and Thank you..
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Katray2
on July 10, 2012 at 10:02 PM
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sad when it is over, well sometimes a relief. LOL.
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Kabu
on July 10, 2012 at 9:14 PM
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help
I'm hooked but still feel I'm missing something. Why bleu not blue, and the dictionary didn't help much with clast
I'm hooked, but want to undersrtand it better - why bleu not blue, does clast mean break as in iconoclast, or should I ask?
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2902
on July 10, 2012 at 8:28 PM
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help
I'm hooked but still feel I'm missing something. Why bleu not blue, and the dictionary didn't help much with clast
I'm hooked, but want to undersrtand it better - why bleu not blue, does clast mean break as in iconoclast, or should I ask?
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2902
on July 10, 2012 at 8:28 PM
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