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Thanks so much, marlindanse. Hope you are well...
posted by
Katray2
on July 9, 2012 at 4:46 PM
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posted by
Reflecting_teddypoet
on July 9, 2012 at 4:39 PM
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Katray2
Nicely said and our gardens look just as 'rusted' as you described it.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 9, 2012 at 7:07 AM
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I really like the close, it tied it all in and yet it left the imagination to continue on as well! KUDOS! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 8, 2012 at 5:34 PM
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You touch upon the senses well in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 8, 2012 at 9:43 AM
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I wish I could send you that precious water Ray it is running away here where no one wants it to go. A nice poem even if the feeling is harsh.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 8, 2012 at 8:40 AM
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marvellous stunning imagery dear one.
posted by
Kabu
on July 7, 2012 at 9:02 PM
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A beautiful piece of work, well done.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 7, 2012 at 8:54 PM
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Katray2
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Hands that come together and on the soil nourish the green leaves of summer love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on July 7, 2012 at 8:30 PM
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