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yes and dont want to vulnerable to anyone

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 10:26 PM | link to this | reply

I have always thought that you write beautiful poetry too Lustor and yes there are days when we feel caged in.

posted by shobana on June 10, 2012 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

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thank you

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 8:58 PM | link to this | reply

I really like your poetry!

posted by Justi on June 10, 2012 at 8:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: lustorlove

thank  you

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply

lustorlove

You're poetry is always very captivating and well written luv.

posted by WileyJohn on June 10, 2012 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I think that Wiley and I have put up barriers so that we can live here free

that is me too, I do what I want when I want to, unless beautiful brat interferes

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

I think that Wiley and I have put up barriers so that we can live here free

to be ourselves. our dear friends are on blogit, we don't spend much time with people around here.

posted by Kabu on June 10, 2012 at 3:08 PM | link to this | reply

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you think

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

Nice to see a poem from you! And I think it needs to be torn down so the world can be seen! sam 

posted by sam444 on June 10, 2012 at 2:53 PM | link to this | reply

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right

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

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thank you

posted by Lanetay on June 10, 2012 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

This kinda reminds me of a lyric in a song by the band Rush . . . "One must put up barriers to keep oneself intact." Once in a while you have to isolate yourself just for your own well-being. At least that's what I think . . .  

posted by JimmyA on June 10, 2012 at 10:32 AM | link to this | reply

I like you used pictures in the poem between the stanzas.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 10, 2012 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply