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Thank you so much for your comment; you are perceptive; it was a real situation.
posted by
Nemi
on June 3, 2012 at 11:01 AM
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This was wonderful, you have the ability to stretch the reader, you will be a star here.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 22, 2012 at 11:39 PM
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I like how you build this poem, taking us every step of the way.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 22, 2012 at 8:21 PM
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Such a real situation, interesting the way this brought it out
posted by
calia14
on May 22, 2012 at 6:35 PM
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Nice tie in at the end! And some folks take time to mature so they have to be brought along slowly! sam 
posted by
sam444
on May 22, 2012 at 5:41 PM
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