Go to Life in the fast lane--where's the on ramp?
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- Go to After The Breakup ... (old poem revised)
Notice that your talent (again!) has clearly expressed what we have all felt at one time or another?
posted by
adnohr
on May 22, 2012 at 9:33 PM
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This is so good. Been there, done that.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 22, 2012 at 6:56 PM
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PatB
Terrific brilliant poetry and I lived it too, over a 'heeless'
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 22, 2012 at 9:20 AM
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wonderful this is, you have captured those days of pain and heels do get
themselves caught by Karma eventually.
We both know a miserable old Bastard now on his own.
I know that drifting feeling, it is a time of healing from the heel. well done and don't ever stop writing!!
posted by
Kabu
on May 22, 2012 at 7:58 AM
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Pat
...And aside from the sharks, any bit of flotsam drifting by may seem a life raft when you're treading water...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 22, 2012 at 7:05 AM
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Great poem Pat , I get the US sense of humour, You also said something so funny, but I dare not tell you what it is.Anyway it would probably not seem funny to you, but it would knock a poultry farmer over.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 22, 2012 at 6:56 AM
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