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PatB
Dang I am just bowled over by your creativity and ability to capture my mind with your talent.
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 12, 2012 at 4:39 PM
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Re: Our Pat has nailed it again. Here I am once more in absolute awe of your
Thank you so much Kabu, but I have to tell the truth. It wasn't easy. I re-worked this poem so many times, including twice since I posted it this morning. For now, it's done.
posted by
Pat_B
on May 12, 2012 at 4:20 PM
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Our Pat has nailed it again. Here I am once more in absolute awe of your
ability to write a few words and make it humorous and horrifically true . and so easily.
posted by
Kabu
on May 12, 2012 at 2:25 PM
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What a write!
I had to laugh in several places, but....
there's also a lot to think about there.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 12, 2012 at 11:25 AM
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Pat
I always enjoy the gritty honesty of your poetry...
posted by
Nautikos
on May 12, 2012 at 9:32 AM
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Pat you are a brave lady, I can't help visualizing what you express, but I won't elaborate.I think it all could have been perfect in your imagination if you were the designer.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 12, 2012 at 8:30 AM
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mmmmmmmmmmmmmm interesting
posted by
Annicita
on May 12, 2012 at 6:36 AM
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Good Grief! Then we're all only giant bugs?
Come to think of it, a neighbour of mine actually looks like a beetle....
posted by
adnohr
on May 12, 2012 at 5:53 AM
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