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Sensual..

.. for both the poem and the picture.

posted by Eleanor_Jazz on May 2, 2012 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply

Great poem I love it

posted by skye08 on April 28, 2012 at 11:10 PM | link to this | reply

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They did? That explains it....been wondering....sorry dear... Duly noted. 

posted by JKosef on April 27, 2012 at 3:38 PM | link to this | reply

this is beautiful - great work

posted by lionreign on April 27, 2012 at 3:00 AM | link to this | reply

JKosef

"  This is a wondrous journey down the lines in this body of words love.  BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 26, 2012 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

beautiful poem but be careful who reads this they want to send you the adult section they did me

posted by Lanetay on April 26, 2012 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful it is when two become one...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 26, 2012 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

Steamy but very tastefully and sensually done.  

posted by Troosha on April 26, 2012 at 9:34 AM | link to this | reply

Very sexy , a partner would be a bit slow if further encouragement was needed. Well written.

posted by C_C_T on April 26, 2012 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

JKosef

Grrrrrrrrrrr! Torrid writing luv.

posted by WileyJohn on April 26, 2012 at 6:53 AM | link to this | reply

I'm not sure if my mother would let me read this, but it sure was nice.

posted by UtahJay on April 26, 2012 at 12:29 AM | link to this | reply

Great passion reflected here .

posted by afzal50 on April 25, 2012 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

A very enchanting poem! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 25, 2012 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

Keep drinking of me until your thirst is quenched...

but with every swallow, my fever roars.

posted by DKosef on April 25, 2012 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

very passionate and a wonderful picture.

posted by Kabu on April 25, 2012 at 1:29 PM | link to this | reply