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well done great story congratulations and keep writing.
posted by
Kabu
on April 19, 2012 at 11:41 AM
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This was lots of fun!
I hope there will be more stories!
posted by
Ciel
on April 19, 2012 at 10:04 AM
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You capture the tension so well. The ending does a fine job of wrapping everything up. I enjoyed every step of the way.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 19, 2012 at 9:08 AM
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