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Re: Riveting...
Thank you, Food! Yes, it is amazing..
posted by
Katray2
on March 22, 2012 at 8:05 PM
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Riveting...
Draws one in quickly. And isn't it odd how a story takes on a life of its own?
posted by
food4thought
on March 22, 2012 at 7:29 PM
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Re: Katray2
Well said, Bill - Thank you!
posted by
Katray2
on March 22, 2012 at 7:09 AM
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Re: Katray2 - yes I did finish it
That is great, Gomedome! In my h.o. writers never really consider any of their works "finished" but sounds as if you are moving on toward your goals. Kudos.
posted by
Katray2
on March 22, 2012 at 7:08 AM
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Katray2
Y The characters have their defenses. They push the story forward against an antagonist, that is war love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on March 21, 2012 at 10:22 PM
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Katray2 - yes I did finish it
By saying I have finished it I am actually saying that I have a complete version of the story in need of more polishing. Part of my reason for coming back to Blogit is an attempt to rekindle my own interest in that work and a few other projects that are not yet complete.
posted by
gomedome
on March 21, 2012 at 8:52 PM
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Re: I just have to agree with our Wiley here!
Thank you, Dear Kabu!
posted by
Katray2
on March 21, 2012 at 8:31 PM
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Re: Katray 2
Thanks so much, WileyFriend.
posted by
Katray2
on March 21, 2012 at 8:31 PM
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Re: Katray2 - this project sounds very interesting
Yes, Gomedome, the scenes unfurl before my eyes and I do my best to capture and do them justice through my words. Thank you for your interest. I remember that you had a good story going awhile back here on Blogit. Did you finish it?
posted by
Katray2
on March 21, 2012 at 8:30 PM
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I just have to agree with our Wiley here!
posted by
Kabu
on March 21, 2012 at 8:25 PM
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Katray 2
This is building up into a dandy story luv, well written and captures my imagination.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 21, 2012 at 7:14 PM
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Katray2 - this project sounds very interesting
Are you finding that plotlines are unfolding as if they are writing themselves? That has been my experience when I feel inspired as it appears that you have been here.
posted by
gomedome
on March 21, 2012 at 5:54 PM
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Just did grammar clean-up on the excerpt..:) Thank you so much, FSI,
Troosha, Sam and CCT!
posted by
Katray2
on March 21, 2012 at 2:07 PM
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So life like Ray, it really stirs one's emotions
posted by
C_C_T
on March 21, 2012 at 12:27 PM
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You paint extremely strong and profound images! A riveting read.
posted by
Troosha
on March 21, 2012 at 12:19 PM
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I think this was profound and I would be highly interested to read more! So, it is a good tease as it were to spike the interest! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 21, 2012 at 11:32 AM
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This has piqued my interest. I like your description style.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 21, 2012 at 9:46 AM
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