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A wonderful post of a childhood memory so well written love
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 4, 2012 at 10:43 AM
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this is so good, you tugged at my heart. When you just write something
like this, you ae so good. Well done. A proud grandmummy.
posted by
Kabu
on March 3, 2012 at 9:14 PM
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You are so wrong.
I don't know if this is part of your major story, but a writer's first job is to get the emotions of the reader. Well, let me tell you.
My emotions are stirring, at least two of them, maybe three. You wrote this beautiful but very sad incident so easily. I can tell by the flow of your words.
Please continue writing. At least if you find writing a long manual, novel hard to do, why don't you write a bunch of short stories for a specific bunch of people. Mom, dads, teenagers, caretakers, etc or for the general public.
My girlfriend of long ago was always saying "some people die with all the music in them." Even Jesus said not to let our talents go to waste. Not only do you owe it to the public, but you owe it to the people or group you are writing for. Please, go for it. Mandy
Peace Love but above all I wish you Laughter.
posted by
Amanda6
on March 3, 2012 at 7:34 PM
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