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In life there is quite the mixture.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 17, 2012 at 10:35 AM
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aceblade
Z It’s as if the imagery represents your whole life before you ace. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on February 16, 2012 at 9:57 PM
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Ok. Understood. I really tried to build it off of the "life is like licking honey off a thorn" idea.
posted by
aceblade
on February 16, 2012 at 8:31 PM
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Re: A very fine and vivid comparison! You might get more ou of it
oops, if you just used the last stanza, adding just a little bit more where necessary. It's all there in those few lines. The rest seems to try to explain too much.
posted by
2902
on February 16, 2012 at 7:27 PM
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A very fine and vivid comparison! You might get more ou of it
posted by
2902
on February 16, 2012 at 7:23 PM
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