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As usual beautiful
but so sad and I remember those nights but dreams are good and filled with happiness in your future and as Kellly Clarkson sings, you'll find the bed is so much warmer now that you are sleeping all alone, dreaming in color, and free, "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger"
sharon
posted by
skye08
on August 17, 2012 at 4:51 AM
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Excedingly sweet and very well written, my princess. Where are you these days? xoxoxo
posted by
anib
on February 27, 2012 at 10:26 PM
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posted by
Nita09
on February 9, 2012 at 2:30 AM
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Especially like the "angst of a submergered anchor forced to hear the laughter of oars above" ..what a line revealing the inner intention of a secret thought! If the purpose of a painting is to find oneself within its moment, then you've clarified a moment for both of us.
posted by
jfm32
on February 7, 2012 at 1:08 PM
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Sinome
Beautifully, lovingly written, a joy to read you as always love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on February 7, 2012 at 9:02 AM
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Very powerful, very sweet and with a beautiful ending, my princess xoxoxo.
posted by
anib
on February 7, 2012 at 1:16 AM
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Lovely. I especially loved the anchor image. Think, perhaps, of
ending the poem at the fifth line from the end?
posted by
2902
on February 6, 2012 at 8:01 PM
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Sinome
Sweet memories! And thanks for your long comment, although, all things considered, it was not very reassuring...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 6, 2012 at 4:23 PM
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The memories are so powerful.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 6, 2012 at 10:20 AM
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this is hauntingly beautiful, sweetie, and superbly written xoxoxoxoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on February 6, 2012 at 4:43 AM
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Mauve thoughts
Exquisitely depiction of dawn. Very mystical.
posted by
2Philomena
on February 6, 2012 at 3:25 AM
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Beautiful and POWERFUL! Great analogy and metaphors.
posted by
aceblade
on February 5, 2012 at 9:20 PM
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Sinome
T{ Excellent. Melancholy for February love. BC-A, Bill’s R:JLst
posted by
BC-A
on February 5, 2012 at 8:38 PM
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lovely sentiments
posted by
Annicita
on February 5, 2012 at 8:31 PM
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