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You are so right Bob, it is getting so bad that soon enough when the doctor turns the baby to slap his little behind it will say Made In China.

posted by UtahJay on January 30, 2012 at 2:01 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you Sinome. This was one of those poems that I

started 2 or 3 times without much of a plan.  The then and now form just evolved, as did the name play at the beginning and end.

posted by 2902 on January 30, 2012 at 12:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bob

Glad you liked it, Naut!

posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

loll  Good one Bob... loved the last few lines  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on January 29, 2012 at 8:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thanks for the visit, Sam. I can remember when everything seemed

to be made in Hong Kong.  Now it's all of China, I guess!

posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Bob

I love it! And E. H. was just about everywhere - he even lived and worked here in Toronto for a bit...

posted by Nautikos on January 29, 2012 at 6:49 PM | link to this | reply

Touche! It seems made in China is everywhere! When I read about Hemmingway I had to chuckle because he grew up in a town near mine, only years before me! And when he became a famous author he would go back for holiday! There was a ferry that connected the banks of the lake, one town to another! One time he was on the ferry and my secretary's father was the captain and he would not budge an inch to give Hemmingway a celebrity break! lol sam 

posted by sam444 on January 29, 2012 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by Annicita on January 29, 2012 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: So, CC, maybe their stuff will go on sale then. Come to think

of it, they probably won't have my size.

posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I really love this one.

Thanks. It was fun to write - it seemed like such a comedown.  It looks like a teen business these days.

posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 11:13 AM | link to this | reply

Never mind Bob tomorrow it will all be old fashioned. 

posted by C_C_T on January 29, 2012 at 9:01 AM | link to this | reply

I really love this one.

The tempo picks up as you go along, it changes from reminiscence to rant! Absolutely would publish it if I had a magazine! Write on!

posted by Pat_B on January 29, 2012 at 7:34 AM | link to this | reply

That's it exactly, Rhonda! It use to be a synonym for the adventurous life

Now it's teen or twenty=somethings looking cranky because they've just been, well,interrupted.

posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

Took all the romance right out of it, didn't it? I like how you said that!

posted by adnohr on January 29, 2012 at 7:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Great Poem.... good commentary on our shopping life

Thanks.  Just coming off the Christmas shopping season, it's been on my mind.

posted by 2902 on January 29, 2012 at 5:18 AM | link to this | reply

Great Poem.... good commentary on our shopping life

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on January 29, 2012 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply