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Re: This little poem put me on a dizzy merry-go-round, and I
Thank you 2902. This is one that I write the majority of the time. I call it writing off the cuff. An idea that I spit out very quickly. Maybe I should put more time into my poetry..I have a bad habit of thinking that readers should understand what I am writing about and I do tend to write in riddles.
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aceblade
on January 26, 2012 at 9:15 AM
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Thank you FSI. I do have to agree with the comments below in the sense that it isn't a beautiful poem. Then again, I do not think and never have thought that my poetry was beautiful. It is what my blog's name is, an autobiography of my life. Thanks.
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aceblade
on January 26, 2012 at 9:13 AM
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A clever little poem that you got there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 25, 2012 at 9:51 AM
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sorry ace
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BC-A
on January 25, 2012 at 7:43 AM
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öPõ A beautiful image Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
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BC-A
on January 25, 2012 at 7:43 AM
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I can not see the beauty of the world this way.
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UtahJay
on January 25, 2012 at 6:34 AM
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This little poem put me on a dizzy merry-go-round, and I
loved the ride. Lines 5,6 and 7 were the highlight.
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2902
on January 25, 2012 at 4:13 AM
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