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Re: CCT

Right Naut I did play the triangle in the school band.

posted by C_C_T on January 21, 2012 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

Your poem is touching chords that vibrate and make me listen...

posted by Nautikos on January 20, 2012 at 4:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T..you paint the perfect fantasy as always...

Believe me Rumour they were for a while, Thank you

posted by C_C_T on January 19, 2012 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

C_C_T..you paint the perfect fantasy as always...

This one is so real one feels they can reach out and touch her...but a wistful ending leaves one wishing, wishing that magic might occur allowing her to become real, even for a short while...

posted by Rumor on January 19, 2012 at 3:57 PM | link to this | reply

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Right FS I hope you will not suffer from such feelings

posted by C_C_T on January 19, 2012 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

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Tell me about it Marrise. but you are right of course, but for some there is no reality.  

posted by C_C_T on January 19, 2012 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

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I hope tomorrow will be a similiar close Sam

posted by C_C_T on January 19, 2012 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CC

Yes always chew that thing thoroughly Wiley you don't know where it's been.

posted by C_C_T on January 19, 2012 at 7:41 AM | link to this | reply

CC

I used to have dreams like that after a bout with Tequila, maybe it was the worm.

posted by WileyJohn on January 18, 2012 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

I wonder when you will write a poem when they happily ever after and that it was all that had inspired it! But, alas, that would not be your style! Your closes are always marked with a touch of reality for me! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 18, 2012 at 3:54 PM | link to this | reply

Fantasy cannot be as good as reality in the longrun. 

posted by mariss9 on January 18, 2012 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

You strike upon the feelings so well in this poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 18, 2012 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply