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Re: Re: Its like I'm whispering to myself.

And we're listening in...that image is perfect with the poem!

posted by adnohr on January 6, 2012 at 4:52 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Its like I'm whispering to myself.

posted by 2902 on January 6, 2012 at 2:13 AM | link to this | reply

Tried to imagine it with all capital letters, and you're right - it hits more this way.

posted by adnohr on January 5, 2012 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re:One morning going to work the exit had black ice - turned

around 180 degrees into the oncoming after going up on the barrier and coming back down again.  I was very lucky, managing to u-turn and continue with never a scratch!

posted by 2902 on January 5, 2012 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you. My last move ws to remove all the capital letters

it seemed to make it all more slow and tentative.

posted by 2902 on January 5, 2012 at 4:32 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I tried "Oh bother", but it didn't do the job.

posted by 2902 on January 5, 2012 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well, you seem to know the feeling I'm talking about, right?

posted by 2902 on January 5, 2012 at 4:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well, there are occasions and words for occasions.

posted by 2902 on January 5, 2012 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Well, there are occasions and words for occasions.

posted by 2902 on January 5, 2012 at 4:06 PM | link to this | reply

LOL>....so true but I have to laugh!

posted by Kabu on January 5, 2012 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

It is amazing how so few words ring so true and bring small moments of terror back. Been there and done that, but so far our winter here has been mild, shirt sleeve weather now when most years it is in the low teens to the minus side in January.

posted by UtahJay on January 5, 2012 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

LOL  I was right there with you - this is brilliantly done

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, Bother Young man.

posted by C_C_T on January 5, 2012 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Troosha on January 5, 2012 at 6:47 AM | link to this | reply

loll...  Teach!!!  Language!  loll but seriously... You nailed it  loll

posted by Sinome on January 5, 2012 at 6:31 AM | link to this | reply