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Re: Re: Its like I'm whispering to myself.
And we're listening in...that image is perfect with the poem!
posted by
adnohr
on January 6, 2012 at 4:52 AM
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Re: Its like I'm whispering to myself.
posted by
2902
on January 6, 2012 at 2:13 AM
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Tried to imagine it with all capital letters, and you're right - it hits more this way.
posted by
adnohr
on January 5, 2012 at 8:23 PM
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Re:One morning going to work the exit had black ice - turned
around 180 degrees into the oncoming after going up on the barrier and coming back down again. I was very lucky, managing to u-turn and continue with never a scratch!
posted by
2902
on January 5, 2012 at 4:37 PM
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Re: Thank you. My last move ws to remove all the capital letters
it seemed to make it all more slow and tentative.
posted by
2902
on January 5, 2012 at 4:32 PM
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Re: I tried "Oh bother", but it didn't do the job.
posted by
2902
on January 5, 2012 at 4:22 PM
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Re: Well, you seem to know the feeling I'm talking about, right?
posted by
2902
on January 5, 2012 at 4:07 PM
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Re: Well, there are occasions and words for occasions.
posted by
2902
on January 5, 2012 at 4:06 PM
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Re: Well, there are occasions and words for occasions.
posted by
2902
on January 5, 2012 at 4:06 PM
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LOL>....so true but I have to laugh!
posted by
Kabu
on January 5, 2012 at 2:02 PM
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It is amazing how so few words ring so true and bring small moments of terror back. Been there and done that, but so far our winter here has been mild, shirt sleeve weather now when most years it is in the low teens to the minus side in January.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 5, 2012 at 9:26 AM
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LOL I was right there with you - this is brilliantly done
posted by
lionreign
on January 5, 2012 at 8:49 AM
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Oh, Bother Young man.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 5, 2012 at 7:14 AM
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posted by
Troosha
on January 5, 2012 at 6:47 AM
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loll... Teach!!! Language! loll but seriously... You nailed it loll
posted by
Sinome
on January 5, 2012 at 6:31 AM
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