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Re: lionreign

That sounds rather uncomfortable, Bill

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you so much, my friend

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: "...deliverers he wouldn't thank" hits a very poignant spot.

Thanks Bob

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Troosha

he certainly seemed that way to me

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: "He had taken the other way" sums it up nicely, lion...

Thanks Rumor

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: UtahJay

Thank you

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:36 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

No he's an old chap I see wandering teh hight street sometimes...

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign

Thanks Wiley, for me it was partly an exercise in empathy as well as one in poetry so I am delighted that you were able to connect with it

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: How tragic, so well written I saw him weaving his way along to destruction.

Thanks Kabu, glad you liked it

posted by lionreign on January 5, 2012 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign

R3T He lives above me lion.  BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on January 4, 2012 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

WOW! How very poignant! It is sad when a person walks away from himself let alone the world as it were! Grand imagery, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 4, 2012 at 8:18 PM | link to this | reply

"...deliverers he wouldn't thank" hits a very poignant spot.

posted by 2902 on January 4, 2012 at 5:52 PM | link to this | reply

That's defeated, alright......

posted by Troosha on January 4, 2012 at 5:40 PM | link to this | reply

"He had taken the other way" sums it up nicely, lion...

A picture of despair...

posted by Rumor on January 4, 2012 at 4:15 PM | link to this | reply

Reminds me of the last 40 something years before 2005 when I changed my life.

posted by UtahJay on January 4, 2012 at 11:55 AM | link to this | reply

Hope he is not a friend Lion, you will have a job to get him on the straight and narrow. 

posted by C_C_T on January 4, 2012 at 10:08 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign

I really identified with this well expressed poem my friend as en ex drunk......

posted by WileyJohn on January 4, 2012 at 8:47 AM | link to this | reply

How tragic, so well written I saw him weaving his way along to destruction.

posted by Kabu on January 4, 2012 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply