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Pat
Yep, the editor did her work...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 29, 2011 at 3:47 AM
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Quite interesting Pat . I have found it tough going writing stories on here, I hope you can pull it off.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 28, 2011 at 11:13 PM
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PatB
You're an editor alright, this really has been brought together nicely, a fine story luv and HAPPY NEW YEAR
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 28, 2011 at 4:45 PM
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very nicely tightened up...worth the rewrite....you do dialogue so well
Oh dear I am like a cracked record but your dialogue impresses me always.
posted by
Kabu
on December 28, 2011 at 6:46 AM
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Yep - went back to read over the first draft; this one is much tighter, I like it better!!
posted by
adnohr
on December 28, 2011 at 5:22 AM
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