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PatB
Keep it coming luv, wonderful writing and now I have to go back to the previous portion.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 18, 2011 at 4:42 AM
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I've been wondering what CSI stood for. I see it on TV listings. Because of your post I now know because I took time to look it up. LOL
posted by
TAPS.
on December 17, 2011 at 11:56 AM
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Re: have you ever written a play darling Pat? Your dialogue is the best
Actually, as this progresses, I'm thinking of doing it as scenes and letting the dialog tell the story, as for a movie. I think Microsoft has a format in the new Office program to create a movie or stage script. Might be fun to try it. I love the way you think. :)
posted by
Pat_B
on December 17, 2011 at 11:34 AM
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have you ever written a play darling Pat? Your dialogue is the best
I have ever enjoyed reading.
posted by
Kabu
on December 17, 2011 at 11:23 AM
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Re: how much of an ass is this cop...
I used to work with police chiefs, edited their articles, etc., when I did a quarterly magazine for IACP in the early '90s. So I got a chance to observe them in their natural habitat. Officer Doan is leaning toward cowboyism, and he's still a bit too green to burn. Don't know yet whether he's an ass or not. We'll see.
posted by
Pat_B
on December 17, 2011 at 11:13 AM
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How much of an ass is this cop going to be? Or is he one of those people you only like once you get to know him? Loving this story!
posted by
adnohr
on December 17, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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