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I love this poem; I had to read it again! sam 

posted by sam444 on December 21, 2011 at 3:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: The Lion in Winter--

thanks Randir... that's the best one I can think of :P

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Untitled

Thanks so much 2Philomena

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

LOL  perhaps they were at home...

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Delightfully steamy - reminds me of carressing in the water back when!

Thanks Bob, I'm pleased to have reminded you

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

thanks Bill

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:28 AM | link to this | reply

Re: very sultry and highly sensual, lion....

Thank you, Rumor

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: sam444

Thank you so much, I was rather proud of this one - it has gone through many more revisions than usual for my work and I felt I had done a good job with it

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:14 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lionreign

Thanks Wiley, I'm glad you enjoyed it - I worked more than usual on this one (as the result of a challenge from my muse)

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: UtahJay

Tahnks Jay, that's precisely what I was aiming for (I bought shares in shower gel companies you know...)

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: very very beautifully written of true passion. well done my friend.

Thanks so much Kabu

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you, you are right, this one was the product of several visits to the original poem...

posted by lionreign on December 20, 2011 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

The Lion in Winter--

has ways of keeping warm.

posted by Randir on December 19, 2011 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

Untitled

A beautiful tribute to love.

posted by 2Philomena on December 17, 2011 at 8:34 AM | link to this | reply

.....and then they go home.

posted by TAPS. on December 14, 2011 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Delightfully steamy - reminds me of carressing in the water back when!

posted by 2902 on December 13, 2011 at 11:47 PM | link to this | reply

¹ Go dawn. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on December 13, 2011 at 9:54 PM | link to this | reply

very sultry and highly sensual, lion....

(Now its my turn for a shower)....

posted by Rumor on December 13, 2011 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Steamy, steamy imagery that was incredulously written! You paint such an exquisite picture of love that it engages all the senses! The riptides of his heart was and her presence was marvelous, marvelous, marvelous! This one is absolutely priceless! Kudos and every other adjective imaginable to you too Lion! EXCELLENT all the day long! sam 

posted by sam444 on December 13, 2011 at 2:43 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign

Me too, cold shower.LOL It was a nice read with a fireplace going my friend.

posted by WileyJohn on December 13, 2011 at 1:31 PM | link to this | reply

I think I need a cold shower after reading this one...well done.

posted by UtahJay on December 13, 2011 at 12:11 PM | link to this | reply

very very beautifully written of true passion. well done my friend.

posted by Kabu on December 13, 2011 at 10:46 AM | link to this | reply

Whoo that was a night that was, very well crafted Lion you did not write this on a fag packet.

posted by C_C_T on December 13, 2011 at 9:48 AM | link to this | reply