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Re: sam444
Thank you so much. A gesture or smile does seem a more efficient way of communicating sometimes
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 8:36 AM
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Re: sam444
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 8:35 AM
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Re: So like the way I think.....
Thanks Straightforward, I wonder if it is normal among the creative types...
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 8:22 AM
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Re: lionreign
thanks Wiley but I think I would have to get somebody else to read them - I'd never be able to do it myself
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 8:19 AM
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Sometimes the words do not flow from the pen as one would like but a gesture or a smile can have the same effect! This was very well versed and I am certain it can affect the reader in one way or another for it seems we have all had that threshold to cross at one time or another! Love is powerful and the words never seem to do the justice we hope but alas we try and try nonetheless! sam 
posted by
sam444
on December 13, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Re: Dr_JPT
Absolutely! I find that even when we use the same words we often speak different languages. Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Re: jfm32
Thank you, it does get a bit stuffy, doesn't it? I thought that when I read it through, but then I knew where the first rush of inspiration had ended and thought I may be being over critical. Thanks for the input, it will help me make it a better poem
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 7:44 AM
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Re: i am pretty sure that she knows because they come from your heart
Thanks Kabu, I suspect she does enjoy them 
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 7:32 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Now where is the fun in making poetry from half truths? I try to keep them all honest but it would be nice to get some beauty there too
posted by
lionreign
on December 13, 2011 at 7:29 AM
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So like the way I think.....
posted by
Straightforward
on December 10, 2011 at 6:50 AM
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lionreign
Put them all on a CD so she can hear your poetry ad infinitum old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 10, 2011 at 6:44 AM
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This sound and fits me as I was and with some today, not always in a romantic sense. I think it has to do with linguistics for depending on the culture and the language within and without, two can talk and neither truly gets what the other says, yet with a touch can get what they mean. Wonderful writing.
posted by
Dr_JPT
on December 10, 2011 at 1:41 AM
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I like the personalness of this--as if talking to yourself. But then I felt it did get a bit formal, when you seemed to turn the inner voice into an outer form--the bane of all us poets.
posted by
jfm32
on December 9, 2011 at 10:20 PM
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i am pretty sure that she knows because they come from your heart
that they are the best for her ever written.
posted by
Kabu
on December 9, 2011 at 2:39 PM
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If it is the truth it will the most beautiful thing you say Lion. Description has to be under stood by both parties.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 9, 2011 at 10:29 AM
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