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Really Enjoy your poems
I have read about 4 now and enjoy them so much. They are interesting and not one bit boring. Makes me come back for more. They are rather exciting. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Angel
posted by
angeljoy
on November 14, 2011 at 8:22 AM
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I have often believed it's more of what people don't say that says the most! This was brilliant and such a climatic ending that caught me off guard because I was headed in one direction and it turned out to be the opposite! KUDOS! sam 
posted by
sam444
on November 14, 2011 at 7:42 AM
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Re: Lion reign
Thanks abernajee, I agree, healthy love is free from delusions and deceptions
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:30 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Thanks Jay, glad to have entertained
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:25 AM
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Re: Boy, that last line caught me by surprise! Not your usual love poem,
Thanks bob, this one is probably more personal than most and so more directly related to a particular person ;)
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
thank you, I think it often is at the early stages when people can't be their most hinest selves
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:15 AM
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Re: It is Amazing
Thanks so much Angeljoy, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it.
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:10 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Very much so. Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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Re: sounds like unsatisfactory games......well written.
Thanks Kabu, it's just a different approach
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:04 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill, glad you liked it
posted by
lionreign
on November 14, 2011 at 7:00 AM
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Lion reign
Mirrors unclean and smoke enveloped around fire, both do not allow one to see clearly the essence of the real, whilst to experience true love is actually divine. No cloak or daggers there.
posted by
anib
on November 11, 2011 at 10:39 PM
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A very crafty poem that I totaly enjoyed reading...it is the things you do that keep me coming back.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 11, 2011 at 9:16 PM
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Boy, that last line caught me by surprise! Not your usual love poem,
but a real and intense one all the same! - Bob
posted by
2902
on November 11, 2011 at 5:55 PM
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Yes, love can be "mirrors and smoke" sometimes. Great posting
posted by
Whisperer4U
on November 11, 2011 at 2:17 PM
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It is Amazing
I love the poem. It is different some how. Very interesting. I will read more. I enjoyed it so much. I was not bored in the least. Kep up the good work. It was well written. There is no way ikt could have been more better. You can if you like read my blog anytime. Thank you.
posted by
angeljoy
on November 11, 2011 at 10:54 AM
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Well sometimes when things look bad they are good Lion, Cute poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 11, 2011 at 10:23 AM
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sounds like unsatisfactory games......well written.
posted by
Kabu
on November 11, 2011 at 10:06 AM
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lionreign
C The usual word forms that describes a positive love relationship are used for a sad one. Excellent. BC-A Bill”s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 11, 2011 at 8:19 AM
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