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Even the scattered pages go flying they remain in the hart of the poet of love. Great job lady.
posted by
Justi
on November 7, 2011 at 3:59 PM
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The mindful will be the ones who discern what is love and what is not! Grand imagery throughout and I loved how you used Shobana! Well done, indeed! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on November 5, 2011 at 5:52 PM
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Lovely thoughts
even though they've been scattered
posted by
malcolm
on November 5, 2011 at 10:31 AM
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I'm having trouble deciphering the meaning of this poem luv. Yes, I do agree 'love is an altruism' but the words 'one of which' just leaves me blank. Sometimes my mind just lacks poetic understanding luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 4, 2011 at 4:07 PM
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The acting is over and without numbers there is no point to caring, just scattered feelings like leaves on the ground...a wonderful poem Shobana
posted by
UtahJay
on November 4, 2011 at 12:15 PM
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What a beautiful poem this is.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 4, 2011 at 11:10 AM
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/ A nice scene composed of words love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on November 4, 2011 at 10:52 AM
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you blind me with your perceptions.....to follow on from CC. LOL.
write on
posted by
Kabu
on November 4, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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posted by
Nita09
on November 4, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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Scrap that Shobana, I usually write things and then think no and I did not even get round to correct my heavy one fingering . I was trying to get inside your thoughts, when you were writing of being Altruistic. Maybe it does appear to make one feel like that or act as such.
Perhaps we are motivated by whom we are and what we need. We can compromise sometimes I suppose. You blind me with science,
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2011 at 2:06 AM
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This is tricky Shobana I can agree with you up to a point, but too be altristic
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2011 at 1:52 AM
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