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Re: just like life
Thanks Randir, that's exactly what I was going for
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lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:57 AM
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Re: sam444
I think there is a juggler in all of us some times
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:55 AM
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Re: Sounds like my golf course reaction
What fun are passtimes with no challenge?
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:51 AM
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Re: BC-A
Thanks Bill
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:49 AM
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Re: shobana
thank you 
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:45 AM
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Re: "Fast hurl and snatch" was particularly good. A very engaging poem!
Thanks Bob, the last laugh was the most important line for me...
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:43 AM
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Re: lionreign, it sounds like fun, and you're doing so well...
I think it's something that must be self taught... one juggles because there's not enough hands for all the clubs
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:33 AM
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Re: Troosha
thank you, coming from such a creative powerhouse that is a high compliment.
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:18 AM
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Re: I agree with whispere4u
thanks you Shams-i-Heartsong
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:15 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
Thank you so much, I shall try not to drop too many....
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:14 AM
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Re: you have captured the fun and the pain of learning a new performance
Thanks Kabu, glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:12 AM
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Re: UtahJay
when my clubs become physical instead of metaphorical I am lucky to keep one in the air. i can ride a unicycle though so my circus skills aren't entirely missing...
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:09 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 7:07 AM
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Re: C_C_T
it is my habit to always try one more than I can manage...
posted by
lionreign
on November 11, 2011 at 6:57 AM
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just like life
posted by
Randir
on November 7, 2011 at 8:11 AM
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This sounds how I might be as a juggler if I would even attempt it! Well versed nonetheless and a fine read! sam
posted by
sam444
on November 5, 2011 at 5:05 PM
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Sounds like my golf course reaction
at missing yet another putt...
posted by
malcolm
on November 5, 2011 at 10:39 AM
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wYR Good moves in this poem. BC-A, Bill’s RJJst
posted by
BC-A
on November 3, 2011 at 7:53 AM
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I love this juggler Lion.
posted by
shobana
on November 3, 2011 at 3:49 AM
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PS I found the laugh at the end very important.
posted by
2902
on November 3, 2011 at 12:07 AM
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"Fast hurl and snatch" was particularly good. A very engaging poem!
posted by
2902
on November 3, 2011 at 12:06 AM
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lionreign, it sounds like fun, and you're doing so well...
Maybe you could give lessons..
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posted by
Rumor
on November 2, 2011 at 12:55 PM
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Just the subject or theme alone reinforces how creative you are. Love it!
posted by
Troosha
on November 2, 2011 at 4:16 AM
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I agree with whispere4u
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on November 2, 2011 at 2:29 AM
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You are a master juggler of words
posted by
Whisperer4U
on November 1, 2011 at 4:28 PM
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you have captured the fun and the pain of learning a new performance
posted by
Kabu
on November 1, 2011 at 1:16 PM
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I tried it with oranges in the supermarket once...ended up having to make them into juice, but again a nice read from you...I could see the clubs spinning in the air.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 1, 2011 at 12:28 PM
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Lovely rhythm!
posted by
Nita09
on November 1, 2011 at 10:15 AM
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Ouch Lion I thought you would keep them spinning. Perhaps stick to six. I like circus poems.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 1, 2011 at 9:40 AM
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