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I loved the lines: "...
the passing train whistling the arrival
of a destination in vain....."
posted by
malcolm
on October 31, 2011 at 1:17 PM
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WOW! This is wonderful, I especially liked the questioning and the reversal at the end was very timely and truly enhanced the overall imagery! I send my blessings and love to you my Shobana! How are you doing these days? Your sam
posted by
sam444
on October 31, 2011 at 10:40 AM
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A wonderful poem. 
posted by
shamasehar
on October 29, 2011 at 10:18 AM
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Shobana, I am sure this is a fine poem, but my old eyes cannot read such small letters.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 28, 2011 at 11:58 AM
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I find time to be so incredibly fascinating.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 28, 2011 at 9:40 AM
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Shobana
Very creatively portrayed luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 28, 2011 at 8:54 AM
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interesting questions
posted by
Lanetay
on October 28, 2011 at 8:08 AM
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nicely done darling
posted by
Kabu
on October 28, 2011 at 7:38 AM
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Wonderful mix of questions and images, I like this a great deal
posted by
lionreign
on October 28, 2011 at 7:34 AM
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Thanks for your visit!
posted by
Nita09
on October 28, 2011 at 6:49 AM
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Yes, where do they? Been there.
posted by
Straightforward
on October 28, 2011 at 6:21 AM
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Re: Re: It configured and confused like a kaleidoscope does.
posted by
2902
on October 28, 2011 at 3:48 AM
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Re:
Hiya CC..never been dunked but I can imagine what it feels like though. glad you find it erotic CC - it was meant to configure and confuse..Well a little maidenly undertones wont harm anyone - I hope!.
thanks for stopping by my friend.
posted by
shobana
on October 27, 2011 at 11:53 PM
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Shobana have you ever been dunked in a horse trough? This is madly erotic with maidenly undertones. Even you have written in tiny words afraid to cast the spell.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 27, 2011 at 11:40 PM
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