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Re: UtahJay
Thanks Jay, glad you liked it.
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 8:21 AM
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Re: sam444
thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 7:50 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
slowing down is a tricky thing to do - this is a quick fix society
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 7:46 AM
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Re: Troosha
now I'm jealous
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 7:45 AM
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Re: When I try poems like this, where the form is such an important part of
Thanks Bob, this kind of poem either works naturally for me or it doesn't work at all
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 6:35 AM
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Re: C_C_T
I don't really fancy self-employment - it will take all the fun out of stealing office supplies
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 6:28 AM
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Re: Eleanor_ Jazz
thank you - I'm delighted to hear that
posted by
lionreign
on October 25, 2011 at 6:26 AM
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I was like Sam, forced to read fast...it was great work Lion.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 24, 2011 at 9:29 PM
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WOW! My heart was racing all the way through because it led me to read it fast, like the rush of the day! This was fantastic! I was impressed how it led the reader to the rush of it all, too! BRAVO! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 24, 2011 at 8:18 PM
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Your words ring true...we are always "too" much, this or that. And life just seems to continue to keep rushing by
posted by
Whisperer4U
on October 24, 2011 at 5:31 PM
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Phewww.... think I'll take a nap LOL
posted by
Troosha
on October 24, 2011 at 12:25 PM
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When I try poems like this, where the form is such an important part of
the effect I want, I often settle for some pretty poor word choices, but you are always spot on! You don't stumble once. This is one of my favorites! - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 24, 2011 at 10:25 AM
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You made it Lion well done. Ever thought of getting a more relaxing job working for yourself.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 24, 2011 at 8:06 AM
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and I feel the rush... I can't breathe just by thinking of it
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posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on October 24, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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