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Re: lionreign
thanks abanerjee, I do like to end my poems on a high note
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:40 AM
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Re: sam444
Thanks sam, I'm glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:39 AM
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Re: The idea of a female knight is intriguing - so many implications! - Bob
Thanks Bob, I felt like playing with the imagery and felt a female knight fitted the mystery of the moment better
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:37 AM
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Re: Very vivid
Thank you, I am flattered
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:35 AM
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Re: UtahJay
I think she was entirely silent... I didn't check for scratches though. Thanks
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:31 AM
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Re: C_C_T
I think I would be afraid if a lass in full armour was after me
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:24 AM
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Re: lionreign
Thanks Bill, I like your story
posted by
lionreign
on October 21, 2011 at 6:19 AM
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lionreign
I loved the twist of 'she', the knight, and that she went home safe and sound to probably a waiting 'embrace', is lovely poetic imagery.
posted by
anib
on October 20, 2011 at 11:28 PM
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I like the take on this poem, too! It gives knighthood a whole new meaning! Touche, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 20, 2011 at 6:03 PM
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The idea of a female knight is intriguing - so many implications! - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 20, 2011 at 3:51 PM
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Very vivid
like an image conjured up by Tennyson.
posted by
malcolm
on October 20, 2011 at 1:18 PM
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As long as her amor was not scratched, or the clinking did not wake her parents...a creative verse Lion.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 20, 2011 at 9:51 AM
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I hope she was not looking for you Lion you could run with this.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 20, 2011 at 9:26 AM
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lionreign
ã Once upon a time lionreign wrote a delightful modern verse of fantasy. He touched it with his magic keys. He gave it adult appeal. BC-A, Bill’s RJLst
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BC-A
on October 20, 2011 at 9:03 AM
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