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Re: sam444
Thanks so much, my friend, I had such fun with this one - it was a spontaneous poem which spoke right from me heart so if there is ambiguity it lies in me
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 8:04 AM
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Re: UtahJay
thanks Jay, I'm delighted to hear that
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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Re: Don't worry, Lionreign..
Oh... then I AM grown up
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 7:52 AM
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Re: This is really good. It hits a very common, vivid note about how we
thanks Bob, I'm flatter to hear that
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 7:50 AM
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Re: Troosha
I think you're right... I didn't know I even cast an image until recently :P
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 7:49 AM
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Re: C_C_T
I suspect not, my grandma doesn't think she should have to be a grown up either
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 7:39 AM
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Re: shamasehar
I think the child in me has pretty much taken over
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 7:35 AM
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Re: I love it just love it...I am not old enough either.
thanks Kabu, I seem to be one of many again, don't I?
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 7:34 AM
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Re: lovelyladymonk
I wonder if anyone ever feels like a grown up...
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 6:57 AM
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Re: TAPS
Does that mean I haven't left my first yet?
posted by
lionreign
on October 18, 2011 at 6:44 AM
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Touche! We must keep the 'kid' in us alive because it makes living a lot more fun! Then I thought about how people perceive is not always who we are when we are in our own element! I like how they poem can be taken a lot of different ways! sam
posted by
sam444
on October 17, 2011 at 9:41 PM
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This was one of your best...I just loved it.
posted by
UtahJay
on October 17, 2011 at 9:40 PM
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Don't worry, Lionreign..
It is 'grown-up' enough for me, when people are trying their best to get what they want without hurting other people.. Apart from that, I like to see people laugh, run, play as free as a child.. I'm sure I'm not the only one thinking like this in this world..
posted by
orcalion
on October 17, 2011 at 8:01 PM
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This is really good. It hits a very common, vivid note about how we
see ourselves. I'm making a copy. - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 17, 2011 at 5:53 PM
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Some of us may cast an image of "maturity" (what is that anyway?) but inside we're still a child looking for fun and excitement.
posted by
Troosha
on October 17, 2011 at 1:20 PM
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Are we ever Lion plenty of truth in this poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 17, 2011 at 11:43 AM
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There is a child hidden in each of us and does not want to grow up.....you put it across so beautifully!
posted by
shamasehar
on October 17, 2011 at 10:14 AM
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I love it just love it...I am not old enough either.
posted by
Kabu
on October 17, 2011 at 10:07 AM
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I agree with you lionreign...I'm just not old enough to be grown up either! Brilliant, as always!
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on October 17, 2011 at 8:47 AM
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I must say that after a long life of being responsible, working hard, caring for others, etc., I am back once more to the point you describe in your poem. I think they call it "second childhood".
posted by
TAPS.
on October 17, 2011 at 8:02 AM
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