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To my senses this says just enough
I never saw the original version, but I do understand about deadwood, especially in poetry.
posted by
Randir
on October 2, 2011 at 8:41 AM
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Re: I would love to have been there with you, I love snakes, I do respect the
Thanks! These re-writes have been good - I find so much deadwood I can strike out, leaving only the feeling or experience that made me write in the first place. - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 1, 2011 at 10:27 AM
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I would love to have been there with you, I love snakes, I do respect the
bitey ones though. This is a wonderful rewrite.
posted by
Kabu
on October 1, 2011 at 9:29 AM
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Re: The poor snake died. - Bob
posted by
2902
on October 1, 2011 at 7:47 AM
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Well I should think so Bob last time it bit you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 1, 2011 at 7:41 AM
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