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I noticed the question mark too and then I pondered how it enhanced the imagery! There are many ways it can be interpreted, at the reader's whim of course, but it was very effective nonetheless! It's the kind of poem where the imagery lingers well beyond the words and so I say BRAVO! Shelly
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sam444
on October 5, 2011 at 1:11 PM
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I noticed the question mark too and then I pondered how it enhanced the imagery! There are many ways it can be interpreted, at the reader's whim of course, but it was very effective nonetheless! It's the kind of poem where the imagery lingers well beyond the words and so I say BRAVO! Shelly
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sam444
on October 5, 2011 at 1:11 PM
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Thank you lion
posted by
anib
on October 3, 2011 at 5:18 PM
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she sounds fabulous
posted by
lionreign
on October 3, 2011 at 7:17 AM
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Re: abanerjee
Yes, now I think she will, sir
posted by
anib
on October 2, 2011 at 11:59 PM
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abanerjee
I am certain she will love listening to you my friend.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 2, 2011 at 1:35 PM
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this is totally stunning abanerjee..Excellent portrayal of a lost lover's dream and his wish.
posted by
shobana
on October 2, 2011 at 12:12 AM
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Ash P
That a poet like you should be praising raises my morale because I aren't one by temperament. Thanks a lot.
posted by
anib
on October 1, 2011 at 9:17 PM
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Holly_Golightly
Thanks dear. I am so grateful for your noticing the question mark. In fact I did wonder whether to put it or not, and I am glad I did.
posted by
anib
on October 1, 2011 at 9:14 PM
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Shams
Many thanks sir.
posted by
anib
on October 1, 2011 at 9:11 PM
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oops, kuch ek
posted by
anib
on October 1, 2011 at 9:11 PM
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shamasehar
Yes Shamaji that'll be good. Rajasthani culture is varied and all foregners find it very exotic and full of valour and you must have seen the Rajput women, so beautiful and the men tall and handsome. Jahaan tak mere poetry ka sawal hai, main yoonhi kushek tukkebaazi kar leta hoon aur aap jaise poetesses jab taarieef karte hain to badi khushi hoti hai.
posted by
anib
on October 1, 2011 at 9:10 PM
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Kabu
Thank you for this classic piece of secret. Hope I am better equipped now
posted by
anib
on October 1, 2011 at 9:03 PM
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Creatively romantic! - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on October 1, 2011 at 12:22 PM
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Very nice...
I like the question mark.... so simple.... but says so much.... or should I say... asks so much.
Lovely...
posted by
Holly_Golightly
on October 1, 2011 at 3:42 AM
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Lovely poem... thank you
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on October 1, 2011 at 3:09 AM
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Hi,thanks for your visits,i shall be posting a few more pictures of my Rajasthan trip.What a delightful place it was.....so full of colors,traditions,culture,different landscapes,forts,palaces,lakes,you are lucky to have grown up there.Aap ka khayal poem mein itna naazuk hai ki choone se bikhir jaaje.....rangon mein tera aks dhala tu na dhaal saki...jo baat tujh mein hai teri tasver mein nahin...
posted by
shamasehar
on September 30, 2011 at 11:36 PM
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The dream is beautiful and i shall tell you a secret my young friend
Women are so often just waiting to be approached, would love to talk and share with you.
posted by
Kabu
on September 30, 2011 at 7:06 AM
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