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Re: TAPS
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:15 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:14 AM
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So true! So true! Beautiful.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 13, 2011 at 8:13 AM
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Re: Nita09
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:11 AM
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Re: sam444
Wow, thank you. I will look for a competition to enter with this one
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:08 AM
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Re: lionreign
There is, although I often struggle to see it
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:05 AM
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Re: shobana
It's definitely arrived here. This year seems to have had an abrupt change of season. thank you
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:03 AM
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Re: UtahJay
you and me both!
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 8:01 AM
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Re: Sinome
Thank you xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 7:57 AM
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Re: Soon very soon some of our leaves are on the turn.
Many of ours are and there is a chill in the air now...
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Thank you
posted by
lionreign
on September 13, 2011 at 7:50 AM
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That was a beautiful introduction to autumn, lionreign
posted by
Whisperer4U
on September 10, 2011 at 4:48 PM
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posted by
Nita09
on September 10, 2011 at 10:34 AM
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I didn't count by any means but just from reading it felt like perfect symmetrical meter, at least and insofar as cadence and rhyme for me! I think this poem is absolutely special. I couldn't help but think of 17th century English poets and yet I was drawn to to Robert Frost because he would say that it isn't poetry if it doesn't rhyme! So many, many facets to this poem! I would urge, urge you Lion to enter this for publication in a magazine or poetry contest! It's SUPERB! sam

Please don't let this one get buried in the annals of Blogit!
posted by
sam444
on September 9, 2011 at 11:00 PM
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lionreign
JZ There’s a whole lot of good in fall. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 9, 2011 at 10:19 PM
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Already autumn on the way..beautiful poetry Lion.
posted by
shobana
on September 9, 2011 at 9:55 PM
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I hate to see it come.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 9, 2011 at 3:45 PM
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So amazingly beautiful my friend... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 9, 2011 at 3:21 PM
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Soon very soon some of our leaves are on the turn.
posted by
Kabu
on September 9, 2011 at 10:54 AM
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loved it Lion especially the thought of Autumn sauntering in crying her eyes out I hope.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 9, 2011 at 10:19 AM
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