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bahut din ho gaye, ab to aa jaayiye.
posted by
anib
on September 30, 2011 at 9:35 PM
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dOlly
So beautifully written. Evocative, as Nita says, but where are you? Hope all is well??
posted by
anib
on September 20, 2011 at 9:03 PM
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Lovely....so evocative! Thanks for your visit!
posted by
Nita09
on September 10, 2011 at 10:27 AM
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I smell it~
posted by
Eleanor_Jazz
on September 9, 2011 at 3:45 AM
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shamasehar...very visual and very much a gift to the senses...
The frangrance is so vivid, we can smell it ourselves as if we're right there in the garden with you.
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posted by
Rumor
on September 8, 2011 at 1:04 PM
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You said it so well.
That's my yard/garden this morning.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 8, 2011 at 9:20 AM
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Hi Shama, sounds like a beautiful morning with the garden in full bloom.
posted by
shobana
on September 8, 2011 at 12:56 AM
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J Oh yes it is love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 7, 2011 at 9:10 PM
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What a wonderfully expressed poem, so short and concise, yet so full of imagery that stirs not only the mind, but our senses...very nice indeed.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 7, 2011 at 5:42 PM
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This is excellent! It says so much in so few words and yet prompts the mind to wander in alluring fragrance! EXCELLENT all the day long! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 7, 2011 at 4:17 PM
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to entice the humming bird and Bee....along of course with you and me.
posted by
Kabu
on September 7, 2011 at 10:28 AM
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