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This is somethting great. Heartfelt, and the verse, fluid.
posted by
anib
on September 7, 2011 at 10:39 PM
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J You can think deeply into a smile love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 7, 2011 at 9:25 PM
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Reading your work is always a pleasure without exception.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 7, 2011 at 6:11 PM
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Its essence is vividly portrayed! I like how the reader can identify with the imagery and formulate how it affects them or how they perceive it to be! Nicely done my Shobana! Your sam
posted by
sam444
on September 7, 2011 at 1:33 PM
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I have wondered where some smiles have gone as well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 7, 2011 at 10:24 AM
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Are you trying to wag my tail Kabu . You could have jumped into the fire, what shall we do with her Shobana? Put her to bed without any supper.
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posted by
C_C_T
on September 7, 2011 at 10:21 AM
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this is beautifully heartfelt. I love the imagery and the tone
posted by
lionreign
on September 7, 2011 at 8:18 AM
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Poignantly heart felt
Great verse, Shobana..
posted by
Raye09
on September 7, 2011 at 7:54 AM
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Re: disagree CC> sometimes it is freedom.
posted by
Kabu
on September 7, 2011 at 6:42 AM
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One has to feel in this one Shobana no one can walk away a say that 's it. Well one could in bleak circumstances I suppose. Memories are apt to come creeping back to puzzle one.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 7, 2011 at 12:26 AM
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