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Beautiful!
One way or another, it does go on.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 7, 2011 at 3:40 PM
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Indeed change always does occur to some degree or the other.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 7, 2011 at 10:24 AM
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oh this is breath-taking. You are such the wonderful romantic, dear friend xoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on September 7, 2011 at 8:07 AM
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I love this ....think I shall call it....for me......LOL
posted by
Kabu
on September 7, 2011 at 6:37 AM
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About sums it up Simone. Nothing is perfect for ever.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 6, 2011 at 11:52 PM
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ahhhh
to feel like that again.....
posted by
Raysongs
on September 6, 2011 at 9:59 PM
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Beautiful thoughts twirling upward from the soul to fan out to all about love, real love, it is perfect and imperfect in our connected hearts. Be blessed dear lady.
posted by
Justi
on September 6, 2011 at 9:42 PM
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Wonderful use of contraries in lilt and rhythm. Was working for me thru
"deams and home". Thought I was being led to a universal vision (or something more implied than stated).
After that I started wondering if I was in another poem. Technically it works. I just felt that from what you had estabished would have left me a bit mre elevated in an unscripted surprise of rapture.
This is just my first momentary impression. If I read it tomorrow, I might feel differently. But what do you think?
posted by
jfm32
on September 6, 2011 at 9:30 PM
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A sweet poem, I am so happy for you.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 6, 2011 at 8:27 PM
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