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Oh, dear Simone, I shall creep into the mundane.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 10:06 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
I am glad you think so Bill.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 10:05 AM
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Quite FS had you not noticed
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 10:03 AM
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The mass keeps on glowing.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 4, 2011 at 9:35 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
A The lines reach a new dimension of emotion sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 4, 2011 at 6:48 AM
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Great one CC... You are on fire lately :-) xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on September 4, 2011 at 6:47 AM
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such an interesting enjoyable read...very expressive...
thanks for sharing.
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 4, 2011 at 2:48 AM
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Right Jay a good job it is or some of us would not get a look in.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 12:21 AM
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Kent thank you I appreciate what you say always.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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Thank you Whispers I did write this many years ago. I tend to examine these old poems and try to improve them.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 12:17 AM
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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
Of course Wiley Kabu has brought you great happiness and as one becomes older it becomes more precious. I know one has to adjust and you have achieved that admirably
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 12:14 AM
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Thank you Sam. I suppose we feel things in aches and frustration and of course jubilation occasionally.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2011 at 12:11 AM
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Beauty is truly in the individual eye.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 3, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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GREAT WORDS, SO MANY GREAT LINES AND PHRASES, I THINK I'VE SAID IT BEFORE, BUT YOU SURE HAVE A WAY WITH WORDS, THAT'S A GREAT GIFT TO HAVE IF YOU ARE GOING TO BE A POET
posted by
Riversidepoet
on September 3, 2011 at 7:37 PM
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I agree with sam, on this one...very poignant
posted by
Whisperer4U
on September 3, 2011 at 5:46 PM
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CHIFFCHAFF
"One stood and felt inadequate. It was easier to dream, it was a necessity.
Indeed, that jumped out at me, I lived alone for eight years after the loss of my Joycie.
Imagine discovering that tremendous love for another can happen more than once in this life, and thank God for 'Kabu', and your wonderful poetry that is always sending a message of love to all of us here.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 3, 2011 at 5:08 PM
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I thought this was a fantastic close to this poem, there were many other fine lines, too:
The original mass glows and defines what one still believes to be beauty. I liked the insight of this poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 3, 2011 at 10:39 AM
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