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I like it when artists are driven by their mood to either write or re-write for one never knows what creative genius might emerge! So, carry on by the mood and let's see what develops so to speak! I loved the title, it set the tone for me! sam 

posted by sam444 on September 1, 2011 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

That happier verse will come.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 31, 2011 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

Stay where ever you are comfortable Raye, all your words are beautiful and looked forward to.

posted by UtahJay on August 31, 2011 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

A job to feel happy Raye of course it is, but better to release it than bottle.                   

posted by C_C_T on August 30, 2011 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Raye09
Thanks, Bill.

posted by Raye09 on August 30, 2011 at 8:10 PM | link to this | reply

Raye09

ööõ It moves the reader to your mood love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on August 30, 2011 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

Re: sending prayers up for betteer days darling.
Thank you, Dear Kabu - I still carry Hope; it is lightweight, unending and easy on the shoulders..

posted by Raye09 on August 30, 2011 at 8:07 PM | link to this | reply

sending prayers up for betteer days darling.

posted by Kabu on August 30, 2011 at 8:05 PM | link to this | reply