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P I want to give my money like they say in the HotMusic willingly. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst

posted by BC-A on August 28, 2011 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Ha, ha, ha, serves you right for taking the peek....
There are no free lunches, friend.

posted by Straightforward on August 28, 2011 at 2:42 AM | link to this | reply

I guess it is better to lean away . Nice rhythm nice to have a jokey one.

posted by C_C_T on August 27, 2011 at 11:51 PM | link to this | reply

Leave it to a woman to distract a man

posted by Whisperer4U on August 27, 2011 at 10:50 PM | link to this | reply

What an awesome and a surprise ending! BRAVO AND KUDOS! I loved the cadence, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on August 27, 2011 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Oh i do like this as a woman it really makes me laugh.

posted by Kabu on August 27, 2011 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

Oh...the old peek show trick. Well done.

posted by UtahJay on August 27, 2011 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply