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Re: CHIFFCHAFF
And little cloudlets follow in the wake Bill
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C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 10:45 AM
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CHIFFCHAFF
P I think of love like two clouds in a disposition film shot that turn into each other sir. BC-A, Bill’s RLJst
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BC-A
on August 28, 2011 at 5:28 AM
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Re: well, the young believe that they own love they own passion...WRONG
Kabu (They tried to tell us we're too young) I bet you don't remember that song the girls used to sing it on the coach as we conscipts came back to camp from leave, it frightened us to death.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 12:26 AM
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Re: Such longing in your words.
Budguy thank you nice to see you around.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 12:21 AM
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Surely so Jay no one can escaped the craftiness of Nature.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 12:19 AM
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Re: Beautifully done, CC
Sadly so very often Ray
posted by
C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 12:17 AM
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Goodness Whispers I only write this stuff but thank you really
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C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 12:17 AM
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HI Sam yes I did wonder about the straw it would rob the soil for a while if dug in. I am glad that you are moving your store. Do be careful that the straw is not mouldy you do not want that on your lungs a man told me once he dug out a Silo with mouldy grain and nearly died afterwards.
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C_C_T
on August 28, 2011 at 12:15 AM
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You are truly a gifted artist, CHIFFCHAFF...your words are deep with meaning
posted by
Whisperer4U
on August 27, 2011 at 10:44 PM
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Great questions to ponder at the end of the poem! I must say, they are intriguing and I would be hard pressed to answer them as well! I have meant to tell you that I am planning to take my bike warehouse, i.e. my makeshift shelter, down for the winter. Last year was a fluke with the snow, we normally do not have that happen! But, I am hoping to buy a house in March or April and I will be getting things ready to move! I have given the floor to my son and I will store my bikes on the covered front porch! And, the straw worked very well, but I had to pull it up and replace the newspaper and put the straw back down! So, next year I will make sure I take the seeds out. It was very nice to have the plant's produce laying on the straw as opposed to the dirt. sam
posted by
sam444
on August 27, 2011 at 7:43 PM
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Beautifully done, CC
I think love has it's own mind..
posted by
Raye09
on August 27, 2011 at 3:59 PM
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I think we all have felt this same hollowness you spill so craftily here.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 27, 2011 at 11:52 AM
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Such longing in your words.
Love is defined by actions, I don't believe it ever really rests. Great poem!
posted by
Budguy
on August 27, 2011 at 10:51 AM
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well, the young believe that they own love they own passion...WRONG
it remains.
posted by
Kabu
on August 27, 2011 at 8:39 AM
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